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Missing
« on: May 15, 2008, 12:40:19 pm »
Something is missing,
I am missing you.
Urgently, I listen for you.
The quiet is far too loud.
My eyes are waiting
For sight of your face.
Emptiness surrounds me,
Standing amid life's clutter.
My space is longing
For you to invade.
Yes, something is missing,
I am missing you.

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Re: Missing
« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2008, 12:55:09 pm »
I like this - I like how you stated in the beginning that "something is missing you" and at the end it's the realization that you're missing her/him.

I enjoyed this.
Thank you for posting, and I'm assuming that you're new - so welcome to G33X =D

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Re: Missing
« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2008, 08:57:31 pm »
Thank you very much for your words. As time goes on, i will post more of my sad excuses for poetry. Also, i have introduced my self in the Mafia Mod Queue, so you can find out my story there. thank you again for your kind words.