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Morgul:

MissTake1024:
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Very well written.

Only a few grammar mistakes but nothing that made me want to  :bang:

I like this a lot =))

I might have children with it.

whitelynx:
Fuckin'.... WOW. :ultramon:

That kicked ass.

Funny thing is, I didn't even notice any grammar issues, and you know how fast those usually catch me... 0.o

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