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Offline xofelf

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Unnoticed One
« on: April 24, 2008, 10:37:40 am »
~Erica~

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Re: Unnoticed One
« Reply #1 on: April 24, 2008, 11:35:46 am »
I liked the overall message of it.
I wasn't too terribly fond of the way that you formatted it.

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« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2008, 01:48:40 pm »
this was for an eglish class so i had to do certain things with it...but i liked the way it went.....dunno why.
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