G33X Nexus Entertainment

Writing => Short Stories => Topic started by: Morgul on April 24, 2008, 10:06:27 pm

Title: Consumption
Post by: Morgul on April 24, 2008, 10:06:27 pm
Title: Re: Consumption
Post by: MissTake1024 on April 24, 2008, 10:25:30 pm
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Very well written.

Only a few grammar mistakes but nothing that made me want to  :bang:

I like this a lot =))

I might have children with it.
Title: Re: Consumption
Post by: whitelynx on April 25, 2008, 09:30:24 am
Fuckin'.... WOW. :ultramon:

That kicked ass.

Funny thing is, I didn't even notice any grammar issues, and you know how fast those usually catch me... 0.o