G33X Nexus Entertainment
Writing => Short Stories => Topic started by: Morgul on April 24, 2008, 10:06:27 pm
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Very well written.
Only a few grammar mistakes but nothing that made me want to :bang:
I like this a lot =))
I might have children with it.
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Fuckin'.... WOW. :ultramon:
That kicked ass.
Funny thing is, I didn't even notice any grammar issues, and you know how fast those usually catch me... 0.o