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Writing => Poetry => Topic started by: xofelf on April 24, 2008, 10:37:40 am

Title: Unnoticed One
Post by: xofelf on April 24, 2008, 10:37:40 am

Title: Re: Unnoticed One
Post by: MissTake1024 on April 24, 2008, 11:35:46 am

I liked the overall message of it.
I wasn't too terribly fond of the way that you formatted it.

Title: Re: Unnoticed One
Post by: xofelf on April 24, 2008, 01:48:40 pm

this was for an eglish class so i had to do certain things with it...but i liked the way it went.....dunno why.