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Writing => Poetry => Topic started by: xofelf on April 24, 2008, 10:37:40 am
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I liked the overall message of it.
I wasn't too terribly fond of the way that you formatted it.
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this was for an eglish class so i had to do certain things with it...but i liked the way it went.....dunno why.