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Writing => Short Stories => Topic started by: Fated on May 11, 2008, 02:03:23 am

Title: The Forge
Post by: Fated on May 11, 2008, 02:03:23 am

Title: Re: The Forge
Post by: xofelf on September 06, 2009, 01:54:45 am

okay... i know this was posted ages ago, BUT i just noticed it.. so i wanted to read and comment...

I think it's very good... and i want to know what else happens...
And, Fated, the characters remind me of you, they have certain actions that are very much you... and i like that. They actally feel like they exist. So congrats on a job well done.