ill prob try seans part, but a few questions on it
Here's the monologue I came up with for Sean's trailer:
My father...<laughes> My Father! My father once told me that power was the only thing that mattered in life. Grabbing as much power as you can before the greedy slime of the universe rips it away from you! <voice becomes scratchy, dark. sub-tones start> If only he knew. Power makes you a monster. Power makes you kill everything you once loved. Power is pain, and pain is the ultimate expression of love in the universe. I loved my father. He most certainly loved me. Unfortunately, I loved him more. So much more.
This universe is our, mine. We wont, can't be stopped. We bring love to the universe, and through us, that love is returned double, triple fold. The pain we will bring will make every living being cry out in the overwhelming agony of our love, and through that cry of shear, unadulterated pain, will the universe's purpose be complete. We are the warriors of love, of pain. We are...<pause> The Grey.
It says the univerise is our, mine what does that meen. And also it says we wont, cant be stopped do you meen we wont, we cant be stopped?
And can "power makes you kill everything you once loved" be switched to "lose everything you once loved" ?