Well, alright for a startout, but I'd prefer to have more graphical feedback, rather than just having "Armor - 78%". I'm not saying you shouldn't have text, but this is a HUD. Be more pictoral, rather than more text-based. The problem with text-based is that it has to be parsed then interpreted. Graphical stuff doesn't need to be parsed; rather, you just have to look at it and interpret it, and it's a lot easier to interpret a picture than to interpret text.
Good start, but switch to graphics for the engine and shields and such. And the cooler it looks, the better - give it a sci-fi feel, rather than just a block colored strip.